goodbye sweet TC

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw slowly padded into Loners terrace. She had been sure to walk through a river o that no one could follow her. She had made up her mind, that she was never going back. She didnt want to be followed. Her little crush on Sunpaw had gotten worse, and since he would never like her the way she liked him, since he liked Dawnflower she would make a new life for her here.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]A pure black she-cat had been napping by a weeping willow,It was her favorite tree.Suddenly, then sent of Thunderclan filled the air.The pretty Black she-cat got up at streached,who ever this person was she wouldn't be there for long.

The black she-cat walked ever so lightly over to were the sent had come from,the she-cat's ear twitched once she was close enough to Dawnpaw that she could hear the apprintice's breathing"What do you want!!" hissed the she-cat as she circled around Dawnpaw agresivly[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw jumped and looked at the she-cat "n-nothing" she meowed nervously.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]The black she-cat spat at Dawnpaw,"Tell me oryou die a sertent death" hissed the blind loner[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw sprang out of the way "nothing that concerns you!" she hissed at the blind she cat.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]The she-cat let out a low hiss then quicklytook anouther sniff of the air, it was riddled with memorys of when she had once lived in Thunderclan."What is you name!!!'hissed the now startled she-cat.[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw looked away "i'd rather not say...if i do they will find me..." she meowed.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shard rolled her eyes "If you want to be a loner, you need to know.No one will come looking for you once you pase the border" SHard hissed deeply.[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

((you have eyes??? lol))
Dawnpaw nodded "Dawnpaw" she meowed.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300](Yea, they just look kreepy from being blind ;D)

Shard looked over Dawnpaw,"Nice to meet you" The blind loner seemed to have calmed down and was now smiling at the apprintice, "Do you know my brother?!?!" asked Shard exsitedly[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

"whos your brother?" she asked.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shard's blank eyes seemed to bright, "his name...His name is Sunpaw"...[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Sunpaw turned away "your brother is the reason i left!" she mumbled imagining his cute face and shaking it out angry at herself.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shard laughed at Dawnpaw "Same,me and my brother,we got into a fight and with into battle.We were battling a loner named Skull,and well I was kidnapped and now.I just don't want to go back"[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw gasped "your Shardpaw! you have to go back! everyone is so worried about you!" she meowed.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shard smiled and sighed "Realy? I know how She thinks,they knew if the clan knew that she didn't care,Boy! I would feel sorry for Brownstar" Shard exclamed happly[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnstar stopped smiling "they all miss you even Sunpaw im sure....i left because of him but not the same reason...i love him and he loves someone else...he hates me!" she meowed.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shardpaw laughed harder "Me and Sunpaw grew up by ourselfs,alone.The reason I am blind is from an attack when I was only a kit.My brother had tryed to stop the warrior from harming me, yet my tail and all four of my leggs were broken in that battle.Along with my sight.He now always trys to avoide the things he loves, thats is his deepest darkest secret"

Shardpaw smiled as she rememberd all the time her and herbrothe rhad shared together.

"Dawnpaw, Sunpaw...His heart belongs tono one.Not even I could get threw to him.Yet,the ones he love always seem to perish and he knows that,if he loves no one.He will never get hurt again..."[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw looked at her paws "but he loves a Windclan cat! who is now a Thunderclan cat cause he invited her to live with us" she meowed.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]"Are you sure he Loves her?",she asked ,"Or dose he think he like her?".

Shard mummbled somthing as she sniffed the air "Here,lets take shelter,a storm is on it's way.Then mabye we can talk a little more,it's not every day I get a cat my age to talk to."

Shard walked out of the clearing,hoping Dawnpaw would follow [/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw nodded and followed after her. She was determined to get Shardpaw to go back to Thunderclan.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Soon Shard came apone a huge rock and at the very bottom of it layed a small holeand at the very top of it was a huge hole to let sun in, yet small enough so if it would rain,Shard could still take cover and be dry in there.The ground under the rock was hollow.Yet strong enought to hold up the rock.This was one of Shard's favorite places to sleep."Welcome to my home" meowed SHard as she ran down to the boulder and crawled into the hole in the ground[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

"Thanks" Dawnpaw meowed and looked around "do you still live with Skull??" she asked.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shard smiled "Yea I do,he lives by the huge Willow tree.Only a little while away from here.Most the time I sleep over there.This is just a place were I come to sleep during storm or if i wan't to take an afternoon nap,I also make underground tunnles,like from here.I could probibley get pretty close to the Thunderclan camp""

Shard yawned as she picked up a rabbit from her own miniture freshkill pile,she droped it a Dawn's feet "here, have it.You need to regain your streath if you are going to live as a loner"[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw had looked uncomfterbal as she heard that Shard still lived with Skull. She sniffed the rabbit but didnt touch it. She looked around uncomfortably "what if Skull finds me?" she whispered to Shard.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shard laughed "Then we are both doomed the arn't we" exclamed Shard as grabed a mouse forherself. "Don't worry about it!Skull is not all bad, plus if he dose come after us.I know my way around the tunals by heart.Yet skull dosn't.So we just run into the tunals untill we find a nice place to rest"

Shard yawned again "So,are yourealy up fro being a loner?" asked Shard as took a few bits of the mouse.[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

Dawnpaw nodded "i will miss Thunderclan but yes im up for it! besides...maybe it'll be fun....if Skull doesnt find me while your not around!" she laughed.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300]Shard finished the mouse the sniffed the air "yea, mabye.Yet Sunpaw,I had already stoped him from killing himself when mon died.i don't know how he will reacked when he knows you left because of him." Shard's closed her eyes to keep tears back "I don't know what will happen" she repeted,Shard opened her eyes to turn Dawn,"I must ask you somthing, has my brother growen much sence I left?" she asked[/glow]

[dawnpaw]

((i hope i give the right awnser))
Dawnpaw looked up at Shard "yes he has...almost the size of a warrior" she meowed not sure what this had to do with anything.

[[Shard].eh]

[glow=white,2,300](don't worry your right, Oh by the way I will be writing a story so I won't post all that often)

Shard laughed "That meens I must be bigger to!" she said trying to get ride of the depressing memorys that haunted her every night."We were apprinticed late you know, at the age of 8 moons" exsplaned Shard as lightning crack trew the sky "Starclan is warrning me" Remarked Shard as she walked into a tunnal "Are you coming? you don't want to saty here do you?"[/glow]