Post by ||Silverstar|| on Apr 17, 2009 21:09:23 GMT -5
After about four years of writing and even longer in spare time, I have begun to want to see how people view my stories. These are not planned for publication, but I am testing the waters, so to speak, if that move would be good. Be honest with your opinion's on my work... I don't need people saying it is perfect when it isn't. I would like criticism and recommendations to make my work great. Thank you.
~Silverstar, First Leader of WindClan, Elemental of StarClan
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To start of I will link this:: www.fanfiction.net/s/4317502/1/Birth_of_a_Hero_Legacy
This story is complete however, I have neglected to continue uploading chapters only do to shear laziness as well as lack of time. I am a busy person and rarely have the will after 8 hours of hard work to keep up my grades to update... Perhaps I will have more incentive upon some comments... *wink wink nudge nudge*
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This next piece is incomplete and probably will take a while to find itself completed. This is a story that is both a backstory for a character of a different story written by a different write I know, however is a stand alone story in itself do to the independence it takes... Based of the game Mass Effect, however, makes as little references as possible to the game itself so that the reader, even having not played that game, may understand.
Though incomplete, I welcome constructive criticism.
Without further Ado, Rakashi: www.fanfiction.net/s/5001383/1/Rakashi_Preview
~Silverstar, First Leader of WindClan, Elemental of StarClan
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To start of I will link this:: www.fanfiction.net/s/4317502/1/Birth_of_a_Hero_Legacy
This story is complete however, I have neglected to continue uploading chapters only do to shear laziness as well as lack of time. I am a busy person and rarely have the will after 8 hours of hard work to keep up my grades to update... Perhaps I will have more incentive upon some comments... *wink wink nudge nudge*
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This next piece is incomplete and probably will take a while to find itself completed. This is a story that is both a backstory for a character of a different story written by a different write I know, however is a stand alone story in itself do to the independence it takes... Based of the game Mass Effect, however, makes as little references as possible to the game itself so that the reader, even having not played that game, may understand.
Though incomplete, I welcome constructive criticism.
Without further Ado, Rakashi: www.fanfiction.net/s/5001383/1/Rakashi_Preview
