Post by Ferny on Aug 6, 2006 16:56:28 GMT -5
this is unfinished but tell me what you think
~Chapter 1~
Shadowed by the early morning sun the gold brown tom moved toward his dsh. Diping his head slightly to lap at the milk he thought about his dream. Lapping at the milk he opened his eyes and wached the bubles float around. Poking a paw at them he poped one. Smiling slightly he bit at another, but then he accidently diped his nose into the milk completly. Jumping back because of the sudden chill he sat and wiped a paw over his nose.
Swishing his tail over the adult mans feet he purred as the man set down a treat in front of him. Biting at the treat hungrely he gulped it down. Sitting up he was slapped in the chest by something. Glancing down in surprise he remembered his tags. They said.
Copper
Rabies and lukemia shots
Due back august 14th
'What ever that means' Copper thought as he stood and headed for the cat door. Sliping through the small plastic door he stepped into the sunlight. Looking around he walked over the the south fence, the one with the rose bushes and oak tree. Jumping int oteh branches of the tree he made his way to the top. Gently pushing hte leaves from his path he scooted out onto the end of a thick branch. Laying down he gazed out over the neighborhood. Hearing a small scrape and swoosh behind him he looked over his sploched shoulder. "Hey Clyde" he said to his best friend.
The gray tabby made his way over to Copper "Hi Copper what are you doing up here?" she asked.
"Nothing, just lookin I guess" he said. "Hey Clyde....how does it feel to nt wear a collar?" he asked as he looked to his friends eyes.
Clydes Yellow eyes wandered to Copers blue collar "Nice" she answered "I mean it doesn't get in your way in all"
"nice, I wish I didn't have a collar on"
"and I wish Shadow wasn't prowling the streets in search of recrutes and killing anything that gts in his path" she said as she looked down to a dark ally wich was belived to be Shadows home.
"True, but he wouldn't bother us...would he?"
"Of course he would!" she growled "Were cats, and we have claws if we are tough he'd want us to join, if not he'll kill us!"
"Sorry I kinda forgot there for a moment" he said as he walked back towrds the heart of the masive tree.
"Copper it's alright, I mean come on." Clyde said trotting up to Copper. "Lets o see Uncle Tipper ok"
"Ok"
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Sliping through the reeds of the creek they climbed teh bank. Looking around they darted from bush to bush. Spotting Uncle Tipper laying benith a rose bush, shadowed by a ash tree they ran over. "Tipper!" Clyde called as her white paws skidded to a stop.
"Whoa hey Clyde, Copper wha'd you guys be doin here?" he asked in his old way.
"I'd be what are you guys doing here Uncle Tipper" Copper corrected.
"Be doin here, doing here same difrence" he meowed. "So what are ya here for?"
"Well we wanted to......" Copper said as he glanced sideways at Clyde.
"What are ya lookin at me for!" Clyde asked.
"You suggested that we come out here, so...."
"Oh right, well Tipper um, about Shadow..."
"Shadow? you wha'd be you guys talking or worryen about him for?"
"Well he lives in town, and well we do to." Copper said
"Right, well just stay out of his path, you should be fine." Tipper said as he poked a small pebble around.
Coppers Blue eyes nervously looked to tipper" But what if we can't?"
"You have your friends, and well ya friends, just stick with them and your humans and you should be fine." Anounced tipper as he stood and wandered over to the barn.
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A tall and heavy horse stood in a nearby stall, turning it's head away from it's food once to glance at the cats. Snorting it startled Clyde. "Don't worry he can't get ya" tipper said as he smiled and wakled over to a smaller more fit cat. The long haired siamese looking cat looked up. Her blue eyes following tehre every move. "Cookie I'd liek you to meet two of my friends, Clyde and Copper" he anounced.
"Nice to meet you, Clyde...Copper, I see you are more fit than Tipper here" she purred.
Glaring tipper sqeaked "Oh ya!" Looking away he mumbled "evil squeaky voise you alwayse kick in on the bad times."
Smiling Clyde and Copper wakled over to Cookie.
"I see you wear tags" Cookie said as she looked at the gold plate hanging from his collar.
"Um, ya I do" he said uneasily as he sat down.
"So, do you want them off?" she asked.
"Ya but, my humans might gt mad, and they'd just get new ones"
"True, so I guess you can keep them" she purred.
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See Chapter 2 for more
~Chapter 2~
Padding ever so gently Copper made his way accross the busy street. Nodding at a few loners as he passed by. Stoping he looked down a dark ally, feeling the urge to go down it, he ran towards home.
When thew small cat door came into view he was relived. Running towards hit he pelted inside. Hearing jack, his male owners voice calling his wifes name, sammy he waked into the living room. Jumping onto the coush with his other friend, Tommie he said "Hey Tommie wha'd ya doin?"
"Visit Tipper again?" she asked as she turned her yellow eyes to him "Ya sound like ya'v been hit by the Tippy talk train Copper" she purred.
"Sorry I have been correcting his talking so much well i've started to talk like that.
"Great"
"Just kidding!" he said nudging her with his head.
"Good cause I thought I'd have to kick you out! mister, Shadow is scary and so are dogs. I never want to see one cause I have no confidence."
Growling Copper swatted Tommie over the ear "ya so what I don't like dogs, or Shadow, and yes I lack in confidence so...."
"So we need to toughen you up!" she mewed.
"Toughen me up"
"yes"
"Toughn me up?"
"yes I alreighdy said that!"
"Sorry but I dont think it is posslible"
"I do" she siad standing "Follow me now Copper."
"Fine he said standing up and following hte gray and white cat through the cat door.
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Walking briskly through the ferns in the near by forest Tommie and Copper walked into a clearing. Jumpng onto a rack Tommie called out a unfamiliar name.
"Who are you calling?" Copper asked.
"Just wait and see mister impatent."
"Fine"
Then a small crackle was heard from the other side of the clearing. Spinning around Copper's tail fluffed out.
"Calm yourself Copper!" Tommie spat as she jumped form the rock and walked over to him. "He is a friend."
"A friend?" Coper asked as he watched the ferns move apart to make way for the dark brown tom.
A dark brown tom walked onto the shaded clearing. Steping lightly as he came the toms ice blue eyes burned into Coppers.
"It's Copper right?" he asked as he neared. "Tommie has talked about you, and alast you've come."
"She has?" Copper said as he looked at his Gray friend sitting next to him.
Ignoring Coppers question she said "So Rakat is it true? you've heard stories about a gold brown tom saving us?"
"It is Tommie, the elders of the nearby mountain have been in contact with our ansestors, they have sent me a message stating that the Golden brown tom shal emerge from his shell and save us all. Boud together by warriors he shall defete shadow."
"Warriors?" Copper asked, "Defete Shadow? imposible" he siad in disbelif, "Who is this Golden brown cat anyways?"
~More to come~
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I know there are Spelling mistakes I haven't had time to spell check it yet. but tell me what you think of it out of a 1 - 10 range ^-^
~Chapter 1~
Shadowed by the early morning sun the gold brown tom moved toward his dsh. Diping his head slightly to lap at the milk he thought about his dream. Lapping at the milk he opened his eyes and wached the bubles float around. Poking a paw at them he poped one. Smiling slightly he bit at another, but then he accidently diped his nose into the milk completly. Jumping back because of the sudden chill he sat and wiped a paw over his nose.
Swishing his tail over the adult mans feet he purred as the man set down a treat in front of him. Biting at the treat hungrely he gulped it down. Sitting up he was slapped in the chest by something. Glancing down in surprise he remembered his tags. They said.
Copper
Rabies and lukemia shots
Due back august 14th
'What ever that means' Copper thought as he stood and headed for the cat door. Sliping through the small plastic door he stepped into the sunlight. Looking around he walked over the the south fence, the one with the rose bushes and oak tree. Jumping int oteh branches of the tree he made his way to the top. Gently pushing hte leaves from his path he scooted out onto the end of a thick branch. Laying down he gazed out over the neighborhood. Hearing a small scrape and swoosh behind him he looked over his sploched shoulder. "Hey Clyde" he said to his best friend.
The gray tabby made his way over to Copper "Hi Copper what are you doing up here?" she asked.
"Nothing, just lookin I guess" he said. "Hey Clyde....how does it feel to nt wear a collar?" he asked as he looked to his friends eyes.
Clydes Yellow eyes wandered to Copers blue collar "Nice" she answered "I mean it doesn't get in your way in all"
"nice, I wish I didn't have a collar on"
"and I wish Shadow wasn't prowling the streets in search of recrutes and killing anything that gts in his path" she said as she looked down to a dark ally wich was belived to be Shadows home.
"True, but he wouldn't bother us...would he?"
"Of course he would!" she growled "Were cats, and we have claws if we are tough he'd want us to join, if not he'll kill us!"
"Sorry I kinda forgot there for a moment" he said as he walked back towrds the heart of the masive tree.
"Copper it's alright, I mean come on." Clyde said trotting up to Copper. "Lets o see Uncle Tipper ok"
"Ok"
**************************************
Sliping through the reeds of the creek they climbed teh bank. Looking around they darted from bush to bush. Spotting Uncle Tipper laying benith a rose bush, shadowed by a ash tree they ran over. "Tipper!" Clyde called as her white paws skidded to a stop.
"Whoa hey Clyde, Copper wha'd you guys be doin here?" he asked in his old way.
"I'd be what are you guys doing here Uncle Tipper" Copper corrected.
"Be doin here, doing here same difrence" he meowed. "So what are ya here for?"
"Well we wanted to......" Copper said as he glanced sideways at Clyde.
"What are ya lookin at me for!" Clyde asked.
"You suggested that we come out here, so...."
"Oh right, well Tipper um, about Shadow..."
"Shadow? you wha'd be you guys talking or worryen about him for?"
"Well he lives in town, and well we do to." Copper said
"Right, well just stay out of his path, you should be fine." Tipper said as he poked a small pebble around.
Coppers Blue eyes nervously looked to tipper" But what if we can't?"
"You have your friends, and well ya friends, just stick with them and your humans and you should be fine." Anounced tipper as he stood and wandered over to the barn.
-----------------------------------------------
A tall and heavy horse stood in a nearby stall, turning it's head away from it's food once to glance at the cats. Snorting it startled Clyde. "Don't worry he can't get ya" tipper said as he smiled and wakled over to a smaller more fit cat. The long haired siamese looking cat looked up. Her blue eyes following tehre every move. "Cookie I'd liek you to meet two of my friends, Clyde and Copper" he anounced.
"Nice to meet you, Clyde...Copper, I see you are more fit than Tipper here" she purred.
Glaring tipper sqeaked "Oh ya!" Looking away he mumbled "evil squeaky voise you alwayse kick in on the bad times."
Smiling Clyde and Copper wakled over to Cookie.
"I see you wear tags" Cookie said as she looked at the gold plate hanging from his collar.
"Um, ya I do" he said uneasily as he sat down.
"So, do you want them off?" she asked.
"Ya but, my humans might gt mad, and they'd just get new ones"
"True, so I guess you can keep them" she purred.
-------------------------------------------------------------
See Chapter 2 for more
~Chapter 2~
Padding ever so gently Copper made his way accross the busy street. Nodding at a few loners as he passed by. Stoping he looked down a dark ally, feeling the urge to go down it, he ran towards home.
When thew small cat door came into view he was relived. Running towards hit he pelted inside. Hearing jack, his male owners voice calling his wifes name, sammy he waked into the living room. Jumping onto the coush with his other friend, Tommie he said "Hey Tommie wha'd ya doin?"
"Visit Tipper again?" she asked as she turned her yellow eyes to him "Ya sound like ya'v been hit by the Tippy talk train Copper" she purred.
"Sorry I have been correcting his talking so much well i've started to talk like that.
"Great"
"Just kidding!" he said nudging her with his head.
"Good cause I thought I'd have to kick you out! mister, Shadow is scary and so are dogs. I never want to see one cause I have no confidence."
Growling Copper swatted Tommie over the ear "ya so what I don't like dogs, or Shadow, and yes I lack in confidence so...."
"So we need to toughen you up!" she mewed.
"Toughen me up"
"yes"
"Toughn me up?"
"yes I alreighdy said that!"
"Sorry but I dont think it is posslible"
"I do" she siad standing "Follow me now Copper."
"Fine he said standing up and following hte gray and white cat through the cat door.
----------------------------------------------------------
Walking briskly through the ferns in the near by forest Tommie and Copper walked into a clearing. Jumpng onto a rack Tommie called out a unfamiliar name.
"Who are you calling?" Copper asked.
"Just wait and see mister impatent."
"Fine"
Then a small crackle was heard from the other side of the clearing. Spinning around Copper's tail fluffed out.
"Calm yourself Copper!" Tommie spat as she jumped form the rock and walked over to him. "He is a friend."
"A friend?" Coper asked as he watched the ferns move apart to make way for the dark brown tom.
A dark brown tom walked onto the shaded clearing. Steping lightly as he came the toms ice blue eyes burned into Coppers.
"It's Copper right?" he asked as he neared. "Tommie has talked about you, and alast you've come."
"She has?" Copper said as he looked at his Gray friend sitting next to him.
Ignoring Coppers question she said "So Rakat is it true? you've heard stories about a gold brown tom saving us?"
"It is Tommie, the elders of the nearby mountain have been in contact with our ansestors, they have sent me a message stating that the Golden brown tom shal emerge from his shell and save us all. Boud together by warriors he shall defete shadow."
"Warriors?" Copper asked, "Defete Shadow? imposible" he siad in disbelif, "Who is this Golden brown cat anyways?"
~More to come~
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I know there are Spelling mistakes I haven't had time to spell check it yet. but tell me what you think of it out of a 1 - 10 range ^-^
