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Post by Swiftfoot[Is Leaving] on Jul 14, 2005 13:12:40 GMT -5
Chapter 1:The beginning
It was the dead of night,Dark and her brother,White
were sleeping soundly,when Dark heard a movement at the entrance of the cave they lived in,she thought it was their mother,returning from hunting.So Dark decided not to wake up her brother,this was a decision she would later regret.She sat up and looked to the entrance,there she saw menacing yellow glowing eyes.She seemed strangly hypnotized by them.Dark shook her head to clear it,she puffed out her chest,I will take care of this,she thought.She began to pad forward,with every step,her courage beginning to fade into the darkness.She had almost reached the entrance,and now she sat,staring at the bright eyes,the creature in front of her opened it's mouth slightly,revealing,sharp,deadly teeth,she sat there listening to the creature's raspy,anxious breath,it's sides slowly expanding with every breath it took.Dark looked back at her brother,and at that moment,the creature attacked,it grabbed her by the scruff,and as it continued to bite her,a blanket of darkness covered her and she fainted
When she awoke the next morning,memories of the night before,stung her,like the creature had done.She tried to take her mind off the open cut she had above her left eye,she turned back quickly when she remembered her brother,but as she turned around,she was not faced with the lively,cheerful,brother she had loved,but with his lifeless body.From that day on Dark was reminded of that night,by the scar that rests above her left eye,and the scar of the death of her brother,her loving White
It had been two weeks since,since White's death.Dark had been wandering the forest,her healty sleek body,and shiny black fur,was now matted,and nasty.She had grieved over his death for no more than one day,she had come to a decision,she would not sulk,she would find the creature that had killed her beloved brother,and get revenge.She sniffed the air,opening her mouth slightly,she smelled something,but it was not the creature.It smelled familar,but she couldn't put her paw on it.She heard a soft rustling under the leaves,it was a mouse,but all Dark could think about was the scent of the mysterious animal.She followed the scent into some thorn bushes,the thorns tugged,and dug into her fur,but she ignored it."Dark?"said a voice behind her,she swiftly turned around and saw her mother,as beautiful,and well feed as ever."Mother?"Dark said smiling,"I'm so glad to see you"she nuzzled her mother,letting her warm scent fill her with warmth and happiness.Her mother pulled away,"You're supposed to be dead"she snapped,her eyes narrowing to slits of hatred,"W-what do you mean?"asked Dark,all the hope inside of her fading away.Her mother smiled slyly,"I lead the wolves to you and White"her mother said."Why?"Dark paused,"Tell me why"Dark said,anger rising from deep inside of her."I was sick of you,both of you!"She snarled,"Mother,i'm hungry,Mother play with me"She mocked.Dark started to panic,this was her mother,her own fur and blood,her head began to spin,for a moment she thought she was going to faint,but then she remembered something,a tiny memory nagging inside of her,"You killed White,and now I will kill you!"spat Dark as she leaped,landing on her mother's black and white back.Her mother threw her off with ease.She slashed Dark's left eye,blinding her in that eye.Dark squeeled and backed up.Her mother smiled,"Don't you realize something Dark,I will never give up,I will kill you in cold blood,today is not the day,but remember this one thing,I will get you"With that she slid in the bushes behind her,leaving Dark petrified by her mother's statement.As she lay there,she knew what she had to do,she had to join a clan and defete her mother,for her and for the forest"I will have my revenge!"yelled Dark,her voice ecoing through the trees,"Revenge"she whispered
Is it good?
It was the dead of night,Dark and her brother,White
were sleeping soundly,when Dark heard a movement at the entrance of the cave they lived in,she thought it was their mother,returning from hunting.So Dark decided not to wake up her brother,this was a decision she would later regret.She sat up and looked to the entrance,there she saw menacing yellow glowing eyes.She seemed strangly hypnotized by them.Dark shook her head to clear it,she puffed out her chest,I will take care of this,she thought.She began to pad forward,with every step,her courage beginning to fade into the darkness.She had almost reached the entrance,and now she sat,staring at the bright eyes,the creature in front of her opened it's mouth slightly,revealing,sharp,deadly teeth,she sat there listening to the creature's raspy,anxious breath,it's sides slowly expanding with every breath it took.Dark looked back at her brother,and at that moment,the creature attacked,it grabbed her by the scruff,and as it continued to bite her,a blanket of darkness covered her and she fainted
When she awoke the next morning,memories of the night before,stung her,like the creature had done.She tried to take her mind off the open cut she had above her left eye,she turned back quickly when she remembered her brother,but as she turned around,she was not faced with the lively,cheerful,brother she had loved,but with his lifeless body.From that day on Dark was reminded of that night,by the scar that rests above her left eye,and the scar of the death of her brother,her loving White
It had been two weeks since,since White's death.Dark had been wandering the forest,her healty sleek body,and shiny black fur,was now matted,and nasty.She had grieved over his death for no more than one day,she had come to a decision,she would not sulk,she would find the creature that had killed her beloved brother,and get revenge.She sniffed the air,opening her mouth slightly,she smelled something,but it was not the creature.It smelled familar,but she couldn't put her paw on it.She heard a soft rustling under the leaves,it was a mouse,but all Dark could think about was the scent of the mysterious animal.She followed the scent into some thorn bushes,the thorns tugged,and dug into her fur,but she ignored it."Dark?"said a voice behind her,she swiftly turned around and saw her mother,as beautiful,and well feed as ever."Mother?"Dark said smiling,"I'm so glad to see you"she nuzzled her mother,letting her warm scent fill her with warmth and happiness.Her mother pulled away,"You're supposed to be dead"she snapped,her eyes narrowing to slits of hatred,"W-what do you mean?"asked Dark,all the hope inside of her fading away.Her mother smiled slyly,"I lead the wolves to you and White"her mother said."Why?"Dark paused,"Tell me why"Dark said,anger rising from deep inside of her."I was sick of you,both of you!"She snarled,"Mother,i'm hungry,Mother play with me"She mocked.Dark started to panic,this was her mother,her own fur and blood,her head began to spin,for a moment she thought she was going to faint,but then she remembered something,a tiny memory nagging inside of her,"You killed White,and now I will kill you!"spat Dark as she leaped,landing on her mother's black and white back.Her mother threw her off with ease.She slashed Dark's left eye,blinding her in that eye.Dark squeeled and backed up.Her mother smiled,"Don't you realize something Dark,I will never give up,I will kill you in cold blood,today is not the day,but remember this one thing,I will get you"With that she slid in the bushes behind her,leaving Dark petrified by her mother's statement.As she lay there,she knew what she had to do,she had to join a clan and defete her mother,for her and for the forest"I will have my revenge!"yelled Dark,her voice ecoing through the trees,"Revenge"she whispered
Is it good?
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